Production
During production I encountered a problem with my hard drive meaning I almost lost all my work, however, luckily I managed to save everything which was a relief that I did not lose my documentary work. I also encountered a problem with my mac, it forced itself to shut down twice while rendering.
When making my documentary, I decided to have the cutaways black and white by using lumetri presets to give it more of an archival sort of look. I did this because it gave it more of an age to it and as Annette and I both are talking about our history in dance it helped give that feel of 'history'
I am hoping it will all come together to make sense about the history of dance and that the cutaways make sense.
FEEDBACK:
Luke: Audio level for music is a little high at times, maybe some cutaways of other dancers or found footage as it is very much focused on you and Annette, maybe add credits
I enjoyed watching this documentary very much! I felt the piano composition fitted very well over the footage. The one thing I would mention would be that the woman's voice at the start is slightly drowned out by the music however the whole thing was great!
The documentary is great. The black and white sections are aesthetically pleasing. The interview framing and composition are great
Tom: I really like the documentary, it teaches people like me who dont know much about dance what it is like. Maybe next time try and make your voice louder! well done :)
I really like this documentary, and i like it more with stories. Also I like the way you chaned interviews in colourscale and changed dancing scenes in greyscale. Futhermore I like if you put your attentiion on sound balancing because I think some parts of interview I haven't heard because background went loud. Overall this is good doc, I do enjoy it well done!
Good use of locations to do with dance. Their was a good difference between your interview and the dance tutor's. Lots of good shots of people dancing. lots of different shot types were used aswell.
Really well made, good choice of music the black and white gave it a very old school look, All i would say is there were parts where the audio didnt sync with the video
When making my documentary, I decided to have the cutaways black and white by using lumetri presets to give it more of an archival sort of look. I did this because it gave it more of an age to it and as Annette and I both are talking about our history in dance it helped give that feel of 'history'
I am hoping it will all come together to make sense about the history of dance and that the cutaways make sense.
FEEDBACK:
Luke: Audio level for music is a little high at times, maybe some cutaways of other dancers or found footage as it is very much focused on you and Annette, maybe add credits
I enjoyed watching this documentary very much! I felt the piano composition fitted very well over the footage. The one thing I would mention would be that the woman's voice at the start is slightly drowned out by the music however the whole thing was great!
The documentary is great. The black and white sections are aesthetically pleasing. The interview framing and composition are great
Tom: I really like the documentary, it teaches people like me who dont know much about dance what it is like. Maybe next time try and make your voice louder! well done :)
I really like this documentary, and i like it more with stories. Also I like the way you chaned interviews in colourscale and changed dancing scenes in greyscale. Futhermore I like if you put your attentiion on sound balancing because I think some parts of interview I haven't heard because background went loud. Overall this is good doc, I do enjoy it well done!
Good use of locations to do with dance. Their was a good difference between your interview and the dance tutor's. Lots of good shots of people dancing. lots of different shot types were used aswell.
Really well made, good choice of music the black and white gave it a very old school look, All i would say is there were parts where the audio didnt sync with the video
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